Friday, June 14, 2024

Making Magic 1 - A History of Magic?

Making MAGIC
For your Fiction

 NOT for LitRPG novelists!

If you are a LitRPG (Literary Role Playing Game,) writer, and you're trying to make a numerical leveling System for your fantasy story, please refer to: Dungeons and Dragons role-playing game, the Dungeon Master's Handbook, specifically. However, just about any role-playing handbook will do. There are literally Thousands of them out there for every type of genre, and many of them are available online for free. Google is your friend. 

After all, that's where Literary RPG came from: table-top Role-Playing adventures that someone wrote down.


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So you want to have Magic in your brand new fictional Fantasy world?

Alright then, lets start with a few simple World-Building questions, so you have some idea of what you're in for-- I mean, some idea of what you're going to need to know to make your new Magical world feel solid and logical to your Readers. 


How does Magic
Affect Your Fantasy World?
 
If you're a writer planning to use Magic in your world, here are a few things to ask yourself while you world-build. 

 

What are they using Magic for?

If Magic is in common use, are they using it to make War or Peace? Are they cooking their food with it? Storing their valuables with it? Building castles with it? Traveling across great distances, or only short hops from town to town? Do they have horseless carriages? Flying ships? Are they communicating across distances with it as commonly as we do with our cell phones? -

Or is it not in common use? If not, then what are they doing with their Magic? Are these magical people in hiding, or protected by the government? Are they gathered in special enclaves, or living scattered among everyone else?

 Who has Magic?

 
Does everyone have Magic, or only a special few? Why would only the special few have it? Were some born with the talent for it, rather like an Artist? Is it something anyone can develop as long as they have proper instructions, like an athlete? Is it something only a few families pass down through their genetic lines?  Is there a special substance that must be grafted onto the body to allow one to use Magic, such as a magical runic tattoo? Does one need a special artifact from a bygone age, or has technology finally developed enough to create a specific tool to access Magic? Does it take a super secret special ritual to awaken one's Magic?

 

What powers Magic?
Where does the ability to use Magic come from? Is it granted as a favor from Spirits? An endowment from Gods? Can one gain Magic from an elixir you eat or drink? Is it generated by an organ such as a Magical Core? Is it an aether that fills the atmosphere that one has to learn to collect, like in Cultivation novels? Is it a power that's already there that one must learn to Feel, like the Force? Oh wait, Cultivation novels use that one too.

 

How do people learn to use Magic?
 
Magic can be very dangerous to both the practitioner and the unaware people around them, if handled incorrectly. So, how does one learn to Control it? Do people have to go to schools to learn how to use Magic? Are the skills passed down through apprenticeship under an experienced practitioner? Does one learn to use Magic from the Gods or Spirits themselves? From dreams? Can someone learn to use Magic by complete accident? 
 
Has your world always had access to Magic,
or is it a new development?

When and where did the use of Magic start? Did a meteor hit the planet and just...irradiate people with Magic? Did some wellspring of pure Magic from the Soul of the World erupt to spray magic into the air like a geyser? Did someone just wish Magic to happen, and it did? Did some strange traveler come and bless certain individuals with Magic?

If Magic isn't a sudden new development, how long people have been using it? Are there a few famous practitioners? What kind of History does your Magic have?

What kind of Spiritual Background are you using for your brand of Magic? 
 
This is Not a trick question. You are basing your fantasy Magic on some form of real Magical/Spiritual practice, right? You're not trying to create a whole Magical doctrine from pure Make-Believe, or worse: relying on Dungeons and Dragons for your Magic, right? 
 
Surely you don't plan to rely on Make-Believe to create an entire System of Magic plus the History that supports that system, from scratch?! 
 
In the beginning, the spirits said, "Let there be MAGIC...!" And it was good. 

 

Writing a History of MAGIC?
It's more Headache than it's worth.
----- Original Message -----
...How am I supposed to explain how magic has evolved over thousands of years from singing and chanting to using magic circles to unleash devastating spells? Like how did people discover drawing circles in the air with magic text inscribed in them was better than singing your lungs out?
-- Concerned Fantasy Writer.


Making up a full History of Magic, or even a partial History of how early Magic progressed from using a shamanistic style of magic; rituals and prayer incantations, into glowing condensed mana imprints; spell circles cast on thin air, especially when there's thousands of years of progress between them, is a Big Project.

What you're trying to do here is similar to coming up with the history of how humanity went from using bows, swords, and horses to conduct warfare, to modern warfare using sub-machine guns, tanks, and helicopters.

To even attempt this, would take massive research. 

Just to start with: 

How much do you know about:
The History of Actual Magic?

Not make-believe magic, like what's found in Dungeons and Dragons, but Real, historical Magic as it is currently practiced here on Earth? 

 Stonehenge

A brief History of Actual Magic

The History of Magic starts at the dawn of human existence.

Sadly, most archaeologists and scholars who study history are Scientists. They don't always recognize the magical (or cursed,) even when it's right in front of their noses.  

Put It Back!

Magic after all, is the bailiwick of Dreamers, Artists, and Poets. It often takes a Dreamer to spot the Magic among the mundane, (and when certain things really need to stay buried.)

Luckily, there are a lot of Dreamers out there writing book after book, and blog post after blog post, about Magic and it's actual History.


Here's a very basic Summery:

-- The earliest form of Magic was basic shamanism which was practiced by native people all over the world in every country, and every culture. 

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Magical songs, magical music, and magical dances to celebrate the sun, create rain, call the wind, bring down lightning, stop floods, walk in the bodies of beasts, encourage fertility in people, land, and livestock, or call an end to winter, are all shamanistic practices.  

Japanese Shintoism for example, is a somewhat advanced form of shamanism still in practice today. 

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-- Prehistoric metal workers; Smiths, were considered powerful Magicians who sang over their forges and knew the secret of how to turn rough stones into gleaming weapons. Especially magical were the sword makers; the bladesmiths who used all kinds of sacred and profane ingredients, including fallen stars, to make mystical unbeatable swords that could empower or curse their wielders. 

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-- Long before Christianity began, Judaic ceremonial magicians worked with divine beings and developed the Tree of Life as a progression map. Through prayers and songs they recorded in their Torah; the precursor to today's common bible, they called down divine retribution, parted seas, sealed ifrits and genies into bottles, and introduced the idea of an Evil counterpart to the Divine: Shaitan; the Adversary. 

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-- From India came the sutras; massive, long, and convoluted prayers that induce a meditative state so strong --and useful-- that the entire far east jumped on their bandwagon, branching out into thousands of different forms of Buddhism.  

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 -- In China, Buddhism was added to the native forms of Shamanism, Astrology, Alchemy, and Numerology. This developed into a new form of Chinese Magic; Taoism, side-branching into Feng Shui. (Keep in mind, I'm being VERY general here.) Both the Buddhists and the Taoists slew demons and monsters, laid the walking/hopping dead to rest, broke curses, tamed spirits, and subdued ghosts. However the Taoists also cultivated enlightenment to reach immortality, and apparently flew on swords as well. Much later, Confucianism was added to the mix and the fortune-telling Tao Te Ching emerged. 

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 -- Chinese Magic; Taoism, eventually spread to Heian Japan. It mixed with the native shamanistic practices and Buddhism already there, and the Onmyoji sorcerers came into being. They did all the same thing as their Taoist counterparts did, except cultivate to immortality and fly on swords. 

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-- The Celestial or Sacred Mathematics known as Geometry started in ancient Babylonia. It was used for surveying, astronomy, and construction of their massive temples. The Egyptians grabbed onto it and developed it further. They used it for surveying, astronomy, and construction too, but they wanted their sacred palaces, sacred temples, and sacred pyramids to also line up with their favorite stars. 

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-- India developed their own form of Geometry for all the same reasons, and built gigantic sacred temples like everyone else, only a lot more decorative. 

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The Greeks snatched Geometry from both India and the Egyptians, then developed Geometry into a high art form. They used it to build even fancier temples plus palaces that lined up with the sun, the moon, and certain planets. 

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-- When the Romans took over Greece, they got a hold of Geometry, and developed a brand new invention called Cement; liquid stone that hardened into any shape you had a mold for. They combined the two and promptly went insane. They used Geometry and Cement to build massive domed temples of every variety for every god, plus aqueducts, fountains, sewage systems, drainage systems, irrigation systems, road systems that covered most of the known world, central under-the-floor heating, heated in-home baths, whole apartment buildings, outdoor theaters, coliseums, purely decorative grand arches, and huge Imperial palaces. 

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 -- By the close of the Roman Empire, Sacred Geometry was firmly under the control of a brotherhood of architects and builders known as The Masons, and was jealously hidden away from anyone that wasn't a Masonic Architect. For over a thousand years the Masons kept Geometry as a Magical secret. Only they knew how to construct the massive, awe-inspiring Sacred temples, mosques, and cathedrals

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-- The modern 'Order' of the Free Masons had their start here. In fact, if you look at any modern Mason ring you'll see the "G" and the tools used for Geometry.  

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-- During the Byzantine era, a Syrian Alchemist created the chemical bomb known as Greek Fire for the Byzantine Emperor. Greek Fire was considered very Magical indeed because no one could figure out how he did it. The Syrian never told anybody. 

Much, much later someone invented something similar under the name: napalm. However, it wasn't considered magical in the least.

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-- In the early to mid 1200's, Roger Bacon, a medieval English philosopher and Franciscan friar, was also regarded as a Wizard. He was attributed to the invention of gunpowder, (clearly stolen from the Orient,) and the magnifying glass. 

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-- In the late 1200's, Dante Alighieri, an Italian poet, writer, and philosopher published three works of fiction that pretty much changed how every single Christian in the world saw Heaven, Hell, and Purgatory. His Divine Comedy: Inferno, Purgatorio, and Paradiso, were published just in time for the invention of the Gutenberg Press. These books, alongside the first printed bibles, promptly spread all over Europe to every home that could afford a printed book.

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-- Dante's stories introduced the nine levels of Hell, and the names of the demons that lived there. They also described the levels of Purgatory, and what could be found there, and the nine levels of Heaven and the names of the angels that lived there. King Solomon was also tossed in and said to have captured and sealed away a great many demons into bottles. Dante listed the names of those demons too. 

Dante's books also introduced the concept of a War in Heaven. This war featured a peerless angel that rebelled against God, and was punished for it by being thrown out, or down rather, to become the ruler of Hell. He even named that fallen angel and gave the ruler of Hell a title borrowed straight from the Torah: Shaitan -- Satan. 

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-- By the mid 1300's all the demons and angels mentioned in Dante's works of fiction, were accepted as being actual demons and angels. Absolutely everyone accepted that the War in Heaven actually happened, and the story of the fallen angel as Fact. There was a Satan in Hell, just ask anyone, even your local priest -- who likely had a copy of Dante's books sitting right next to his personal bible. For reference.

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-- There was actually a reason why Fiction suddenly became Fact. Namely: the Black Plague and the Bubonic Plague.

The only explanation anyone had for everyone dropping dead around them was either "God hates us," or "There was no God." After all, God was supposed to be a being of pure Goodness and Light! God wouldn't allow a Plague to go killing off innocent people!

Well, the Catholic Church certainly couldn't have people stop believing in their God. That was an awful lot of tithes (money) they'd lose out on. So in all their wisdom, the Catholic leaders in Rome decided they needed Someone to take the Blame

They looked no further than Dante's books. 

The plagues were Satan's fault. 

Satan, a fictional character from a work of fiction: Dante's Inferno, has been blamed for everything wrong with the world ever since.

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-- By the late Middle Ages (c. 1350–1450), the major plagues were pretty much over, so there were plenty of farmers growing crops and breeding livestock once again. 

With the sudden surplus of food, after decades of famine, all the peasant farmers, and the lords that ruled them, started celebrating -- with Pagan festivals dedicated to the old gods of Fertility, and Alcohol. 

Pagan rituals and celebrations were a lot more fun than sitting in a cold stone room crammed in next to your unwashed, smelly neighbors on hard wooden seats being snarled at by the local Christian priest for hours

Nobody wanted to be yelled at for enjoying making love to their own spouse, enjoying the beer and mead they brewed in their own cellars, or for women using their skills to make an income to help support their families. So they stopped going to church. 

More importantly however, they stopped paying for the churches' upkeep.

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 -- To deal with the crisis, (the churches were losing a lot of money,) the Christian leaders in Rome did two things. The first was to make the local gods into Christian Saints. This allowed the local celebrations, now sanctified by the local churches -- as long as they still went to church on Sundays.  

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-- The other thing the Christian leaders in Rome did, was start a Smear Campaign against anything, and everything to do with Magic. 

It worked on the uneducated peasant populous. The local herbalists and midwives had a hell of time Christianize their herb names, and changing all their incantations into Prayers. 

The educated populous however, smiled in church on Sunday, but held secret book club meetings the rest of the week. In their private parlors and hidden rooms alongside close friends and associates they perused old obscure books about Geometry, Alchemy, Philosophy, and Magic.

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-- As a result of those secret book clubs, in the 1400's, Middle Eastern Alchemy became quite popular in Europe, and split into two distinct branches. One branch was very practical in nature. These Alchemists developed the earliest techniques for creating artificial, manufactured, jewels: diamonds, sapphires, emeralds, and rubies. They did this by combining base ores and certain chemicals in a high pressure furnace called an Athanor. Of course a lot of them blew themselves up doing it too. 

Today, Cubic Zirconium; manufactured diamonds, are created in this exact fashion. With a lot fewer people being blown up.

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 -- The other branch of Alchemy was highly philosophical in nature, and considered one of the earliest forms of Psychology. The very earliest form of psychology being talking to your local shaman or priest.  

This 'spiritual' Alchemy became known as Hermeticism. 

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-- During this period, the Northern Europeans went through a Magical Renaissance. By dredging through every obscure book they could find, they developed a whole new system of Magic. 

This new Magic combined the Judaic Tree of Life/Sefirot magic, Masonic ceremonial magic, different forms of fortune-telling, Astrology, Greek Philosophy, Hermeticism, mathematics, and a dash of shamanistic spirit summoning

As a result, this form of Magic invoked Heavenly and Unholy powers using angelic and demonic names straight out of Dante's works of fiction, through basic addition and subtraction called Magic Squares. These Magic Squares were later made circular and stamped on medallions.

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 -- You can find a bunch of these squares and the symbols created through simple addition and subtraction in the Ars Goatia, also called the Lesser and Greater Keys of Solomon. The Ars Goatia is where all those fancy circle spells you see in manga and anime were borrowed from.  

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-- In 1478, the Spanish Dominicans, a branch of rabid Christians who murderously loathed anything that wasn't their brand of Catholicism, (and women in general,) petitioned the Monarchy of the newly unified Spanish kingdom for permission to combat heresy and demon worship in Spain. 

These Dominicans were known as: The Spanish Inquisition. They were also nicknamed; Domini Canis; Dogs of God -- implying just how rabid they were. 

This Inquisition had their own form of Magic that utilized prayers from the bible plus a few they created themselves, consecrated hosts, holy water made by their churches, blessed swords, and lit torches. 

Permission granted, they went absolutely insane. They grabbed anyone and everyone that wasn't their brand of Catholic, from peasant to noble. Especially if they were female. Once they tortured confessions out of them, they burned or hanged them to death. Then they took the deeds to their property -- for God. 

They killed a lot of people.

The Inquisition remained in operation burning and hanging heretics, demon worshipers, and witches all over the world until they finally lost their permission in 1834. 

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-- In the early 1500's --despite the threat of The Inquisition-- a German Renaissance philosopher named Agrippa, came up with the Angelic ScriptTransitus Fluvii, and Malachim alphabets to make communicating with Heavenly beings easier. 

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-- During this period, telling the future by Scrying; seeing, by peering into a bowl of liquid, or crystal balls, or reading the swing of a pendulum over a laid out alphabet, plus Astrology, and Tarot card reading, became very, very popular. Everyone who was anyone was doing at least one of them during dinner parties and afternoon teas.

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-- In the late 1500's, an an English Renaissance occultist and scryer called Sir Edward Kelly, and his friend John Dee, an English court astronomer, came up with the Enochian alphabet. This was also meant for communication with Heavenly beings -- and taming ghostly beings. 

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-- In the 1600's, Voudon, (voodoo), a form of native West-African shamanistic magic mixed with prayers and songs from the King James bible, developed in Haiti and quickly spread through all the islands close to it. It also spread to the Southern US and outward with the slave trade. 

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-- By the mid 1700's, the British isles developed two distinct forms of magic. Witchcraft; based on native shamanistic rituals, and Ceremonial Magic, which was pretty much a cleaned up and polished version of what was being practiced in Europe mixed with Masonic rituals. 

Currently, the witchcraft forms are called Wicca, Paganism, and Heathenism respectively, and the ceremonial forms are mostly under the headings: Hermeticism and Western Esotericism, with thousands of variations under both types of magic. 

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-- In the 1800's consumption; tuberculosis, began to kill large numbers of people all over the place. Because everyone had someone they dearly missed, a pretty large occult revival happened all over Europe and in the US. Seeing and talking to spirits of the dead by way of seances: featuring full on possessions by ghosts, table-tapping, levitating objects, and the appearance of ectoplasm, became very, very popular. Especially in England.  

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 -- In the mid 1800's, the Rosicrucian Fraternity appeared in the US, a mix of Occultism, Hermeticism, and Christian gnosticsm. Supposedly it had a long and involved history that went back to the 1500's. Said history has since been debunked as Fictional. However, the Magic works just fine. 

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-- In 1940 in England, Neopagans, and very witchcraft Wicca, emerged onto the public domain. Their brand of Magic was shamanistic at core, celebrated old Celtic and old Scandinavian gods, utilized divination, and was only loosely organized. These practitioners also borrowed bits and pieces from just about every other form of paganism, mysticism, and the occult -- depending on the practitioner's personal feelings, beliefs, and curiosity. 

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-- In 1969 modern Satanism happened. This form of magic and the belief system that went with it was put together by one man: Anton LeVay. He used bits from the common King James bible, some demonic names from Dante's books, created a philosophy of Self-Worship based on European Hermeticism, added a few European magic squares, and mixed it all together with basic Golden Dawn brand ceremonial magic to make it pretty. Strangely enough, it actually works.  

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-- In 1977, the US government recognized Wicca as an official legal Religion. This prompted a massive explosion of books for and about witchcraft. Some of these books are quite informative and well researched, others, a jumbled rehashing of what was already floating around from the last occult movement during the 1800's. Buyer beware. 

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And that's just skimming the surface of the History of Magic right here on this world. If you want to know more, Google is your friend.

Knowing the Facts about real Magic can assist you in making any form of fictional Magic, no matter how Make-Believe, not only logically operable, but feel Real and possibly even familiar to the readers.

 

As for the original question...

Magic using Computers
The Irregular at Magic High School, Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei

You Don't need to Invent a whole
History for Magic.

Writing a whole history; even in note form, would be a massive amount of work.

Instead, focus on how your spells are Powered; Gods, Spirits, the Force, a magical core? Then work out the reasons why the spells were progressed from shamanistic incantations to the form you plan to use in your story. 

A good place to start would be looking up the early Magic practices of the culture you're writing about. For example, JRR Tolkien's high-fantasy stories about wizards, elves, dwarves, ents, and trolls was based on early Scandinavian mythology. 

 

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 FullMetal Alchemist
Magic through Memorization.

As for Mana Circle Imprints... 

Just coming up with how mana imprints happen will be headache-inducing enough, forget trying to write a history for how that came about.

I mean seriously, if we use most fantasy anime and manga as examples, and skipping the fact that most of the circles came from images in the Ars Goetia books... To use projected mana circles, those magicals have to Memorize every circle they intend to use; like in FullMetal Alchemist, then project the right amount of mana to create each memorized circle -- then supply mana for the effect they want to create, every single time they want to cast a spell.

Are you aware that at this point in time in the Modern Era, only Idiot Savants and extreme geniuses are capable of doing that kind of memorization? The regular human brain simply can't hold that much information without the memory degrading -- in minutes.

Clearly, normal-brained magicals need something to assist them in making the right circles occur, so they can then put their mana into them.

Here's a few ideas: 

  • For magicals that live in a time before computers, books with all the circles written down for easy access is commonly used in most RPGs. By the way, hunting for books with more powerful spells is a very common subplot. 
  • Magical Objects with pre-loaded spell effects; such as talismans and artifacts, commonly appear in Chinese Wuxia and Xanxia stories, and Oriental Onmyoji ghost stories.
  • Magical Tattoos; spells written on skin, are a common shortcut in Celtic, Norse, and Gaelic legends.
  • If your magical lives in a modern or sci-fi world, a hand-held computer like a smart-phone that projects those circles via holograms can be used. In fact, this technique is used in the manga and anime series: The Irregular at Magic High School, Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei.

Trying to add a History to how all this came about is a sure-fire way to kill all your inspiration to write. Better to just skip it entirely -- like everyone else does.

 

In Conclusion...

If you're determined to create your own brand of Magic for your stories, the best place to start is with the History of Magic that already exists for whatever culture you happen to set your story in; Chinese, Japanese, Norse, Celtic, Polynesian, African, European Medieval... Use it as a jumping off point, or a framework that explains why your magic works the way it does. Simply adjust the facts to fit the story you want to write. Add things, or subtract things as needed.

Just please be aware that there will be actual practitioners of magic in your reading audience. We will Know when you mess up and don't keep to your own lore, just as easily as we know when someone is using Dungeons and Dragons as a base for their magical system.

After all, we love Fantasy stories too. If we didn't, we wouldn't be practicing magic in the first place.

Morgan Hawke

Wednesday, February 28, 2024

Types of Adult Fiction

 

"When does writing go from being adult writing to straight up porn? I want to write something for the story, but including sexual scenes without making it porn. Any tips?"  -- Wants to Upgrade from Young Adult into Mature Adult

 Okay, first we need to do some defining, plus a few technical details. 


The Different Types of Adult Fiction

According to the publishing industry in the US and Canada: 

PORNOGRAPHY

Pornography consists of images, video content, and illustrations of people having sex. In short; if it's Not a Picture, it's Not Porn.

The main audience of Pornography tends to be Men strictly interested in 'getting off.' There are a few targeted for women, such as Adam and Eve productions, and Playgirl magazine, they are few and far between. 



 
EROTICA

Erotica is WRITTEN Stroke Fiction; fiction specifically to get the reader hot and bothered to the point that they can actually 'get off.' 

PLOTTING Erotica

Plot may or may not be included. 

If there is a plot, its purpose is to get the main character involved in as many sex scenes as it can before the story comes to a mutually satisfying end. 

SELLING Erotica

Erotica is very difficult to get anyone to pay for because its the most easily accessible form of fiction available. There are literally thousands of free internet story sites that specialize in only Erotica. 

This also means that other than Fan-fiction sites, these sites host the highest number of amateurs to writing found anywhere. Reader Beware, seriously. The spelling errors and hideous grammar will make your eyes bleed long before the impossible sex scenes and over-the-top cliche characters get to you.

WHO READS Erotica?

The main reading audience of Erotica tends to be Men strictly interested in 'getting off,' but a lot of women in their 30's and 40's read it too.
 
WRITING Erotica

To satisfy these readers the detailing needs to focus on the sexual action scenes, so the author needs to be at least half-way decent at writing sex scenes without confusing the reader as to who is doing what. 

Also, these readers enjoy the sexual partners being lovingly described with an emphasis on proportions and the messy details; the sweat, the tears, the saliva, plus the slapping and jiggling of flesh in action.

Love can feature in the story, but it's not anywhere as important as the sex.

 

EROTIC ROMANCE

Erotic Romance is Adult Pulp Fiction. Adventure stories for Adults.

PLOTTING Erotic Romance

This genre needs explicitly described sex scenes AND a detailed adventure plot, so take out all your favorite adventure fantasies and indulge in your most desperate Adult fantasies during said adventures.

WHO READS Erotic Romance

These stories tend to be written for Adult Women in their 30's and 40's with adult appetites, who also read for pleasure. However, a growing number of Adult Men are also reading these books, especially those heavier on the Adventure Plot and lighter on the sex with a Male main character.

SELLING Erotic Romance

Erotic Romance is what made the eBook industry take off, and why the eBook industry still exists. It's a lot easier to hide that one is reading a work of smut on a phone or tablet than when reading a paperback. 

As it stands, eBook Publishers are still out there looking for hot adventures to publish and oddly enough, so are many of the paying WebNovel sites. However while both types of publishers want a 60% to 40% ratio in the Sex vs Story content, the WebNovel sites prefer 60% Story and 40% Sex, to the eBook publishers who prefer 60% Sex to 40% Story. 

This is one of the largest paying reading audiences out there -- which is why I write it for a living.

WRITING Erotic Romance

To satisfy these readers the detailing needs to focus on the Action scenes; sexual and non-sexual. The author not only needs to be able to write damned good sex scenes, they need to know how to write good action scenes too: fights, chases, and daring rescues. 

These readers also want detailed descriptions of not only ALL the characters in action, but the scenery around them. These readers want to BE these characters and Live the adventures they're reading.

Romance should feature in the story, between the MC and their main love or lovers, but it doesn't rule the story, Adventure does.



 
ROMANCE

Romances are the Emotional journey between a Lover and their Beloved, or Beloveds. 

PLOTTING Romance

Plot doesn't need to be heavy, only strong enough to get between the lovers and keep them from confessing until 3/4s of the way through the story. 

Technically speaking, once the confession scene happens where the lovers declare their love for each other, the story is OVER. The rest of the book is Plot Clean-Up where all loose ends are tied, all faces that need slapping are slapped, and a wedding may, or may not happen.

WHO READS Romance

This reading audience tends to be almost strictly Women between 15 and 50.

Romance has the #1 largest paying reading audience in the US and Canada, trouncing every other genre reading audience by a Large margin. However, this reading audience tends to get the bulk of their reading material from bookstores, Amazon, and Kindle -- not online story sites.

WRITING Romance

To satisfy these readers, the Emotions the main characters feel need to be detailed, with emphasis on Angst and Pining. 

Character descriptions plus Scenery and Clothing descriptions are always appreciated. (It's all about the Pretty, seriously.)

Sex scenes can be halted at passionate kissing scenes if the writer is feeling particularly pure, but full blown Romantic sex scenes are much appreciated, though it can be limited to three at the minimum. Adventurous chase and rescue scenes can be lightly described, but should be there too to give the story spice.

Reminder: These definitions are strictly for the Publishing Industry in the US and Canada. Other countries have their own definitions.

 

 
ONLINE STORY SITES

As for story post sites like Scribble Hub and  WattPad--

I've personally noticed that the main reading audience of these type of sites seems to be fairly young; in the late teens and early 20's. There is a fairly strong showing of those in their late 20's and early 30's, but only a smattering of those in their 40's and 50's.

There is also a strong division in reading preferences between the older audience and the younger audience.

The younger audience seems to prefer strongly plotted Adventure stories with no sex to only hints of sex; minimal kissing scenes and fade to black sex scenes that are easily skipped over. Think: Young Adult novels.

This audience is not willing to pay for their reading material. Mainly because the youngest of these readers are often still in school and generally unemployed. They're not willing to spend what little pocket money they do have on stories when there's too much available free online that while not great, is good enough.

The older audience prefers Adult Adventure stories with the sex as detailed as the adventure scenes. These people also read some of the Erotica selections, but it's far too easy for them to find actual erotica written by far more skilled authors from other sources such as Literotica.com, and Lush.

These readers do tend to have a regular income, so they Are willing to pay for a good story -- but that story had better be worth paying for.



My advice?

Practice your Plotting skills, writing sex scenes, and writing action scenes on a different story-posting site Under a Different Author Name before presenting it on a site like Scribble Hub. This will garner you the largest reading audience, and the highest praise.

Why should you practice on another site first?

Readers Remember and Avoid authors known for writing poorly. 

They remember rampant typos, poor grammar, poor punctuation, hateful main characters, and plotting foul-ups. Even if the author improves, those readers have already made their judgements and will not ever return.

THIS is why you want to get all your practice done elsewhere, this way you can come in clean and strong and make a good reputation for yourself from the very start.

But that's just my Advice. Take it or leave it, as you please.

 

Morgan Hawke
www.morganhawke.com

Friday, September 10, 2021

The Curse of Run-On Dialogue

 

The Curse of Run-On Dialogue
AKA; Narration Run Amok


----- Original Message -----

[What should I do] about splitting [dialogue] paragraphs that are [all] by the same character? I usually do it for emphasis or to show that there's a brief pause between them. Like when a character suddenly changes his/her topic.

-- My Characters Won't Shut Up! --


Paragraphing IS supposed to be divided by character; actions + dialogue. However, sooner or later one will run across: Run-On Dialogue.

Run-On Dialogue is when one character talks, and talks, and talks...for whole paragraphs at a time.

Oddly enough, this problem isn't all that common, but it can happen to new writers who still haven't quite figured out how to break up their dialogue with actions and descriptions.

Far more common is the creation of whole paragraphs of Internal Dialogue and Introspection, especially when one writes in First Person POV, or Third Person Close POV. This is known as Narration Run Amok.

When only one character is acting and talking, or acting and thinking, this can make for walls of text the size of a skyscraper.


So, how do you break up that
Wall of Talking?

Well hopefully you're breaking all that talking up with body language, actions, and descriptions.

Seriously, that's what you do first:

Break up your lines of Dialogue with:

  • Actions
  • Description
  • Body Language

Next!

Sub-Divide those lines of dialogue into paragraphs by:

  • Change in Action
  • Change in Location
  • Change in Thought or Ideas


Example: Change in Thought or Idea

Did you know that you're supposed to write someone arguing with themselves as two different people complete with paragraph breaks, even though they're the same person?

I sure didn't.

Then my editor sent me that particular manuscript page covered in red ink.


Example: All three in 3rd Person Close POV:

Excerpt from Death & The Maiden

Standing with her back against her room's closed door, Michiru clutched her bathrobe to her throat and gasped for breath. She'd known that Koyomi and Aso were...dating, but she hadn't quite realized they'd gone that far.

She winced. Idiot...! Of course they've gone that far. The Yomi half of Koyomi's personality was openly lecherous, at least around Michiru, and Aso was a known womanizer. She'd had more than one run-in with his openly adoring and half-naked harem.

Michiru sighed heavily then turned to her right to set her bath things on her battered dresser next to her aged brass bed. It was beginning to look like she was the only virgin in the dorm. In fact, according to the gossip her classmates shared, she was very likely the only virgin in the whole senior class.

She was seriously beginning to feel rather...left out.

Michiru scowled and jerked opened the middle drawer of her dresser to yank out a pink flannel nightgown. Stupid virginity! She flung the night gown on the neatly made bed and slammed the drawer closed. It wasn't that she was saving herself for marriage or anything. She doubted she'd live that long. She just wanted to give her virginity to someone she liked - that liked her back.

However, the way things were going, she sincerely doubted she'd live long enough to go on a proper date, never mind get the chance to lose her virginity. Damn it!

Michiru stomped across the room to pull the heavy curtains closed. It was too damned cold at night to leave them open. The cracked windows did little to keep heat in the room. She then moved to the fireplace opposite her bed and knelt to light the paper covered fire log in her fireplace, then added a few actual wood logs. The aged fireplace was the room's only source of heat and the paper coated fire log only lasted a few hours.

Once the log was well and truly lit, she slipped out of her bathrobe and pulled her night gown over her head, tugging it down over her nudity. Stupid zombies! Why were they all in her town anyway? If it hadn't been for them, she'd have been able to live a normal life and gotten herself a normal boyfriend.

Michiru flopped back on her bed to stare at the cracked, water-stained ceiling. So what should I do? She didn't want to die a virgin! That would be completely pathetic.


Note how the character's Actions and Mood Swings (the back and forth in Thought,) allowed for paragraph breaks.


Hopefully that helped.