tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post114074903280794681..comments2022-08-14T13:50:24.360-04:00Comments on Dark Erotica Writing: Non-Verbal ThesaurusMorgan Hawkehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06263736921990480868noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-58858030966699185782009-12-11T21:54:20.332-05:002009-12-11T21:54:20.332-05:00This is very informative! I'm always looking f...This is very informative! I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing. Thanks :Drocquellanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16750664744528491799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-5426795804646302602007-09-05T21:38:00.000-04:002007-09-05T21:38:00.000-04:00Saxgoddess25, -- Your second line is a terrific im...Saxgoddess25,<BR/> -- Your second line is a terrific improvement. With just a few word exchanges, you went from stringing thoughts together to creating an image that I could see in my mind's eye. Bravo!Morgan Hawkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06263736921990480868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-33835794989678287152007-09-02T18:39:00.000-04:002007-09-02T18:39:00.000-04:00Well gee...I was going to post a comment about usi...Well gee...I was going to post a comment about using alternatives to "said," ie. hissed, muttered, and the like because I was using them in the first page of a novel I've started. Then I truly looked at the sentence I was going to use as an example and it was like a lightbulb popped on and I <I>saw</I> how I could turn that into body language cues instead. <BR/><BR/>The difference between what I Saxgoddess25https://www.blogger.com/profile/10300576417488758644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-1141600054230414562006-03-05T18:07:00.000-05:002006-03-05T18:07:00.000-05:00Hi there,This is a pretty awesome entry. Its reall...Hi there,<BR/><BR/>This is a pretty awesome entry. Its really cool the way you have the descriptions set out. Just wanted to say that I love your work, and finally getting out there in publishing, your tidbits have helped polish my writing.<BR/><BR/>Mila RamosMila Ramoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16749425163028904436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-1140831912304655172006-02-24T20:45:00.000-05:002006-02-24T20:45:00.000-05:00Don't you DARE feel bad, Morgan. What you're doing...Don't you DARE feel bad, Morgan. What you're doing is making my writing BETTER!<BR/><BR/>If/when I get a chance to meet you, I owe you at least a drink. Or maybe a nice piece of silver chainmail jewelry.... <BR/><BR/>You rock, you explain things in concrete ways that I can really "get" them and with each new thing I learn, I can tell my WIP just gets better.<BR/><BR/>Now... about Flight of the Maura Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06160491439597824853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-1140825939480662442006-02-24T19:05:00.000-05:002006-02-24T19:05:00.000-05:00I was wondering what that first commenter was doin...I was wondering what that first commenter was doing when he advertised charter boats. LOL <BR/><BR/>Well, at least he liked your blog.<BR/>Maybe he was just being helpful, giving us all an insiders look in the world of charter boats. Another resource if you will. LOL<BR/><BR/>No? You're probably right. Just a spammer. But, as I said, at least he liked your blog.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15435928827370589951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-1140812287534737262006-02-24T15:18:00.000-05:002006-02-24T15:18:00.000-05:00Hey Pat, - I'm just trying to be helpful. I DID k...Hey Pat, <BR/> - I'm just trying to be helpful. I DID know about the Reverse Thesaurus! I also have the "Descriptionary" a Thematic dictionary! <BR/><BR/>Hi Daria, <BR/> - I'm glad you liked this post! I keep telling pwople that they don't need to use "said" but they always come back with - "Then what do I use instead?" Hopefully this answered that question. <BR/><BR/>Waht's up Maura!<BR/> - "Morgan Hawkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06263736921990480868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-1140806493431013882006-02-24T13:41:00.000-05:002006-02-24T13:41:00.000-05:00I want your whole "how to" book! LOL.New "Morgan s...I want your whole "how to" book! LOL.<BR/><BR/>New "Morgan says" pass through the WIP - this time looking for "asked" and "said" :)Maura Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06160491439597824853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-1140789208072902742006-02-24T08:53:00.000-05:002006-02-24T08:53:00.000-05:00Great new article! (I've been revising a story, an...Great new article! <BR/>(I've been revising a story, and the heroine always either stares or glares. I think she glares once on every page. Hmmm :) )Dariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10816279105715189601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9469853.post-1140776508333088412006-02-24T05:21:00.000-05:002006-02-24T05:21:00.000-05:00Morgan,This was truly amazing. I love the non-verb...Morgan,<BR/><BR/>This was truly amazing. I love the non-verbal thesaurus. (I love resource books period) Anyway, thank you for posting this. You are making our jobs easier by providing this information. <BR/><BR/><BR/>By the way, did you know there is a reverse illustrated thesaurus? It gives the concepts as headings and specifics under the headings. ie boat -- gives all the nautical terms that Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15435928827370589951noreply@blogger.com